Reviews for Reckless
Angelic Winter chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
You got a realy good start, keep up the good work. I love your stories!
SLigHtLy FrEaKisH chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Totally funky story! I loved that parting remark "I will drive that car again" I don't know why but it gives her funny/determined character. Oh, and I have a Ray-Ray in my story too! But my Ray-Ray is a girl (named Raylee), lol. Keep it up! But don't neglect 'Fallen'. I like 'em both!
deviegurl chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
please hurry and update! this story is too good to not care about!
Katie Jean chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Oh I see where this is going. Raythe has a thing for her huh? Oh and you know, adding that little "but I will in the next chapter" is sort of torture. Unless you have the chapter there, we're all show us now! Anyway, sounds great! I hope you don't give up on the last one. I added another chapter but it isn't showing up so I guess its lagging...
Phoebe Love chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
This is really cool. I like the dynamic that you have already given to the story, I just hope that you update soon.
whee chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
The beginning is great! Keep writing girl! I have brothers just like that! GR! It's soo annoying!
crimson7319 chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
lol. i like it, um it says that the second chapter doesn't that good?
Rainbow Fingers chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Wowie. I really loved it. The characters are just so great! I was laughing my head off. Man if I had brothers like that . . .I dunno what I'd do.
As long as you make up for missing details next time, I'm happy. I'll be looking forward to your next installment, udpate soon!
Alexz Lynn chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Good job! This looks promising. My only critique is proofread a little more. There were a couple comma and period mistakes. Otherwise, good job! I'll be looking for more.
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