Reviews for Reckless |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You got a realy good start, keep up the good work. I love your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally funky story! I loved that parting remark "I will drive that car again" I don't know why but it gives her funny/determined character. Oh, and I have a Ray-Ray in my story too! But my Ray-Ray is a girl (named Raylee), lol. Keep it up! But don't neglect 'Fallen'. I like 'em both! Later ~FrEaK~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() please hurry and update! this story is too good to not care about! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I see where this is going. Raythe has a thing for her huh? Oh and you know, adding that little "but I will in the next chapter" is sort of torture. Unless you have the chapter there, we're all like...no show us now! Anyway, sounds great! I hope you don't give up on the last one. I added another chapter but it isn't showing up so I guess its lagging... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really cool. I like the dynamic that you have already given to the story, I just hope that you update soon. Feebs |
![]() ![]() The beginning is great! Keep writing girl! I have brothers just like that! GR! It's soo annoying! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. i like it, um it says that the second chapter doesn't exist...is that good? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wowie. I really loved it. The characters are just so great! I was laughing my head off. Man if I had brothers like that . . .I dunno what I'd do. As long as you make up for missing details next time, I'm happy. I'll be looking forward to your next installment, udpate soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! This looks promising. My only critique is proofread a little more. There were a couple comma and period mistakes. Otherwise, good job! I'll be looking for more. |