This is by far my favorite chapter. It's an emotional roller coaster, I love how so much happens. I really feel for both caracters, you did an amazing job at making them complement each other perfectly.

I haven't read much so far, but I like where this is going. I'm going to read more. And thank you for the positive review, I appreciate it!

I just started reading this story from the begginning today and i love it! I hope you update soon. I really wanna know what's up with Terra! Does she have a deadly disease or something?

Aww.. that was mean she left him standidng there all alone!

Hmm...don't suppose Caleb's gonna go to Ny soon, now would he?Great story! Love the characters, mac, especially Terra ;-). Will read on when I have time (srry new semesterwork!)~birdytamel~ps. thnx 4 reviewing my story!

Poor girl, how the absence of her father has affected her. Can't blame her about the brothr.. I have one and he's really annoying...~birdytamel~

oh no! What's wrong with Terra? Excellent chapter! Keep it up!

wow. thats all i can say. this has to be one of the best stories ive read in a long time. when i started reading it a few hours ago, i was hooked. amazing

Caleb has a really nice mom to bail him out of jail like that, so quickly. Hm...I liked the emotional scene between Thomas, McKenna, and her little brothers. I hope she can make things right before she goes off to college. Keep Writin'
~Alexz Lynn

Awesome! I'm really getting into this story...u have to write more soon. I cant believe Brittany did that:( Shes such a bitch. I totally wasnt expecting the story to go in this direction. Thats a good thing by the way...predictable stories are boring.

Good so far...I can definately see something is going to spark between Caleb and McKenna.

ooh...good story...i'm very glad I read it...can't wait until the next chapter...I hope everything's going to be okay...keep up the great writing!

I ablsolutely love this story so far! I love how cynical McKenna is...she makes me laugh. And their town...willow lake reminds me so much of the place where I go every summer to visit my grandmother (i hate it there, I've never gotten used to the small town life after growing up in a big city) ...oh, thanks for reviewing Obsession...i didd know that chapter 4 and 5 are the same, i ddid that on purpose because they're in different points of view...wasn't the best idea...anyways i'm going to read more now.

How sad! Update soon!

I'm sure Brittany had a good reason for calling the police...right? Keep Writin'
~ Alexz Lynn