|Reviews for Blue|
| Grayhome chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
*An ocean of eternity... what exactly does that mean? It's a distracting line, and doesn't add anything.
The words in this poem don't flow into each other as well as they could, and frankly I'm surprised, because I read one of your other poems and it's just so much more flowy and good.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
I've seen such eyes as you describe—oceans clear azure where we can dive and treasures find. m
| tlk2boris chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
simple yet intriguing creations comes from some of the best minds
| killinglights chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
That's what I call getting lost in someone's eyes. Beautiful!
| mysterious-muse chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
One word WOW! Even though it's not long,it says soo much.I love this.I think you are very talented.
| Cadience Gemma Topaz chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
AGAIN...love the imagrey...whoa
| Athena's girl chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
so short, and yet so sweet.
| SleepDontWeep chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
really nicely written! x
cud u check out some my stuff?
| Saiai chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
Oh! I like this _ I feel all relaxed after reading if for some reason.
| amazingblazes chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
I love the words you used in this poem. The descriptions were flawless...I really enjoyed it!
| Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
I keep thinking I will be used to your poetic genius, but I never am. This is LUCIOUS!
| sunstormed chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
"Your lashes bring the waves."- absolutely lovely
gorgeous imagery, as always!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
::sigh:: I LOVE blue eyes...awesome extended metaphor... amazing poem
| Joey7691 chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Blue is my favourite colour! I see blue in everything. I love the poem.
| The Black Rider chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Beautifully written, almost seductive in its nature. I love it.