Reviews for R'
pointythings chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
The rhyme scheme goes wacky at the beginning and at the end, but other than that it's cool.
Serfious chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
This is a good poem, keep up the good work. I appreaciate you using my line as your catch fraze and thank you for adding my name to it.
-Serfious, the Wolf-
A Stranger chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
I really like the "I don't ever remember my life/being rated 'R' for gore" part. I like it - only one criticism overall, and really it could just be my own opinion - but "drying" doesn't quite seem to fit. It almost seems like it was used just for the rhyme. I'm guilty of the same thing sometimes, so I really shouldn't talk...
erin chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
dead stuff...ick i dont like it.
tsubasa kuroi chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
It's really powerful and full of raw emotion. Death, gore, blood, and the feeling or sorrow as you slowly slip away. Great work _. Thanks for reviewing my poems. I know they need lots o' work n have horrible spelling, that's what you get for writing at 2 in the morning. :P. As for Japanese it's hard to learn, ganbatte kudasai!
FireNeiko chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
freaky Danielle