Reviews for Tantalyzing
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
ah i can relate.. nice job
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
Hemoglobin red,

Needs more oxygen for bed,—

Energy's all bled. —m—
pointythings chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Woah, creepy.
erin chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
so you need more blood? blood is not a color, it is an object.
L. S. Lynn chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
this poem to me describes basic human instinct. We are drawn to carnage. It is what brings us to action. It excites us, no matter how much we try to deny it
FireNeiko chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Blod
X9
coolness