Reviews for A Year in the Life of a Supermodel's Sister |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why did Zachary freeze? Please tell me he's not gay. Wait... it's the fashion industry... who am I kidding? Almost all the guys there are gay/bi. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, I'm so sorry to hear that. This story is awesome. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! Zachary is so charming. I hope he doesn't turn out to be a bad guy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Christian's and Gemma's chemistry. Her sister needs to effing disappear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you continue this story. It's always been one of my favs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope that one day you would finish this story. I've been a a fan of your writing before you went on hiatus; and for some strange reason, I haven't lost hope that you would one again post an update. This is such a wonderful story and I really want to finish reading it through the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is very interesting indeed! now, i shall continue. LOL :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() naww poops! i was wondering why it was so short. loll. pretty please update..whenev u feel like it of course :P loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT :O! You could have put a Authors not to tell me! NOW IM DISSAPOINTED! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait what? ugh please please continue! damn it! I really want to know the rest of the story... oh well |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good! too bad that you couldn't finish it! [ |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH NO! YOU CAN'T ABANDON THIS STORY! :[ That's depressing. Cause I really really really really love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well..wow. Last time you updated, it was 2005. AND look at the calendar, its 2007 already! :D haha. Kidding. Didn't mean to get to your nerves or something. I just wanted to say that I absolutely enjoyed your story! And even though its been two years already, I'm still hoping you'll update! :D Just a suggestion, though. You have no problem with dialogue whatsoever but I think you have to give a little background for each character. I just think the story's way too fast. But I also think that Zachary is hot. So is Christian. :D Man, I wish you'd update, but, oh well. :D I'm still happy you wrote this. |
![]() ![]() i just want you to know that...i... hate you now! your story was really good until you decided to discontinue it!please know that i would immediately forgive you if you updated. you probably don't even care that i hate you but, oh well you are just oone more person i will track down and kill. see you soon. |
![]() ![]() A promising beginning... I like the specifics of the fashion industry, it looks like you've done some research (even just by soaking info in). Just a note; try to be careful of your commas, because I think you're dropping a few and it makes it sound a little amateurish. Not that it's a bad thing, since we're all amateurs, but fixing it would just add a subtle bit of sophistication to your writing. |