| Reviews for A Year in the Life of a Supermodel's Sister |
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   Water Block chapter 2 . 1/27/2006 I love that Christian referred to Gemma as Elvish! I don't like the sister's condescending attiude, but Loved how Christiean picked her out of a crowd, and the dad instantly knew who she was. Of course, beind an artist/photagrapher himself, I would expect him to stay updated. I loved that she took the cheesecake (I wouldv'e!) and that Gemma was brave enough to stand up to the two guys, and tell them no, rather than be sucked in and intimidated. Great chapter! |
| Water Block chapter 1 . 1/27/2006 That was cute. I think I'll like this story. Watching a great episode of Dark Angel for the second time in a row as I read this. |
| jennyyy chapter 7 . 1/10/2006 NO! you cant stop writing! at least finish writing the story. ] please? with a cherry on top? |
| The Pixie on Zoloft chapter 1 . 1/8/2006 Hmm...earlier in this chapter you said that your narrator was chinese, african, and french (quarter, quarter, and half, respectively), then you said "he's one third spansih and two thirds french, just like me" Check your parallelism elsewhere, too. I didn't catch anything else, but it's easy to do. I myself have done it as well. Otherwise, i'm baited. Can't wait to read on. |
| Pigment of Your Imagination chapter 7 . 12/30/2005 ...o.o Let me tell you..i was lookin this for about 5 minutes when it hit me...NO! Ya cant stop writing it! U dont have 2 start all over! Just use the previous chapters! please please please! This story is realli good! So good..id give awake 10 chocolate, vanilla, & cookies & cream sundaes with whippin & rainbow sprinkles & chocolate syrup with a cherry on top if you'd finish it! PRETTY PLEASE? Angie, a realy desperate person who wants you to continue! P.S. or else i shall throw rubber fish your window! P.S.S. is it rubber fish? or rubber fishes? or rubber fishies? ;) |
| Water Muse chapter 7 . 12/25/2005 Your story is just amazing! Please contiune, its make me laugh a couple of times ;) Anyway ... I hope that you will finsih it |
| instantaneous karma chapter 7 . 12/21/2005 Ahem. you don't have to re-type this, you can just highlight, copy, paste and voila! C'est votre roman! So... I strongly encourage that you do so, because this story is rather entertaining to read... sorta like popcorn (and gummy bears).. I'd really like some gummy bears right now.. anway, WRITE! NOW! |
| A Tree chapter 1 . 11/24/2005 Oh I do like it. I love your style and the flow is great. Humorous, too! Off to read more. A definite favorite! |
| lallala chapter 7 . 11/21/2005 please continue! its such a good story |
| enjee chapter 7 . 11/5/2005 It's really unfortunate that you'll be abandoning this story! I could tell from the beginning that this story has great potential! Please don't stop writing! |
| BangBangYourDead chapter 1 . 11/4/2005 OO I loved this chapter! Its my first time reading it and its soo good already. |
| lilis chapter 7 . 11/2/2005 that's too bad... i really like reading this story.. well maybe you'll pick it up again soon. |
| j.u.s.t. .f.o.r. .m.e chapter 7 . 11/1/2005 if you give up now, your giving in to the person who took your pen name... don't give up i wish'd you'd continue writing, if that's your pasion |
| Juniper Nights chapter 7 . 11/1/2005 Thats to bad...i actually really liked this story...:( |
| minute-glass chapter 7 . 11/1/2005 aww... i really liked this story too! you can't just abandon this story! :( i'm gonna miss it. well i hope its only on hiatus for now, not forever. :( |