Yes, write more chapters. This is a good story showing how strong Matti's faith in God is.

Hey there. Thanks for your review! It really encouraged me. My internet access is kind of sporadic right now, so I won't be able to read and review much this summer (I am actually working at a camp and my position is really similar to Olivia's in "Masterpiece"...without the dining room stuff) but I will get back to it in the fall! I like the start of this and cant' wait to read more once I find the time!

A very good start. I like the way you've focused on her emotions while giving so much information without really dumping it on the reader. The use of the journal was excellent too. Well done. I shall try to keep my eye on this.