Reviews for Blind Desire
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
and blind desire it is.
this is so beautiful,
in a horrific way.
you're going in my favourites.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
Darling, your work is fantastic, don't feel down on yourself. Writing has a life of its own so some times it can be cruel or kind to us. It can be hard. But all of your work is beautiful. I wouldn't worry.
Much love,
Juliet.
somethingpoeticandmeaningful chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
Sheesh, you people UNDERAPPRECIATE FREAKING GOOD POETRY. Blindies. I really like this poem, and I feel honored that I was your helpful viewer(although i'm sure not the only one). I really just like the feel of it and the description, it's very emotional and it's a poem that you can look through and find something. Kapish? I love it i love it I love it. I love you.
Phoenix-Pen chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Unusually good angst! That sounds so patronising . . . sorry, but for every poem like this that turns out well I seem to read three that really haven't. Well done!
Brigitte Faust chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Really good. I love the last line.
Lauren Raven chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Good...I can relate to most of it. Since I'm horrible at coming up with summaries too, what I usually do is just put the first four or five lines of the poem in quotations. Great job; keep writing.