Reviews for Unbeatable
Rafael Freire chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
very good! another amazing job... as usual! keep writing...
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
Not bad, not bad. It's inspiring but I do have some nitpicks. I hope you don't mind :)
This would probably make a better poem than a song. It also needs a little bit more work. Polish it up some and you will have something better. I'm serious.
Keep writing though :) Good try.
CT
Dr. Happy chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Like all the songs on here this is pretty bad as a song...maybe poetry but not a song
Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
This was really really inspiring work.
Excellent work!
*AbunaiChikara