Hey! I loved this story!

I was just confused about one thing; why didn't avril remember him? I'm so confused.

Like this story. A sequel sounds good to me though!

i like this...but why do you use uh instead of a?

hilarious loving author's note...

I'm sorry, let me rephrase. I'm insulting your plot choice. The choice aside, you execute the plot to pure perfection. I was never expecting to read one of those heart renchers like this. Now, for criticism. The part when Av told Bryant that she loved him was a tad melodromatic. A better way to do it would have been to not make her obvious stronger feelings for him so evident. I would also really like to know how he died, but maybe that's a mystery never to be solved. Wonderful story.

That's horrible. No, I don't mean the story, just what happens to Bryant at the end. All that he's been through with Avril, and she doesn't even remember him. Now, I understand that it had been five years and people change. Which is what makes it all the more confusing as to why he didn't tell her who he was. There was probably some insane underlying reason saying, "She doesn't remember me, so it couldn't be true love." Damn. But that's me insulting the writing talents of an author, and not the story.

yes a sequel! YAYAYAYAY that'd be much appreciated. lol and the story was really sad, good, but sad. well yeah keep up the greatly awesome work and i'll keep lookin for a sequel!buh byeLizzie

God that was a depressing story. Everything just went wrong for Avril. I can't believe Avril didn't remember him thats horrible. but good story a bit confusing at some points.

i loved this story! It was so sad that she dind't remember him though... :( ...

I think this is a really great story, it made me cry loads of times. The only thing that's annoying me is that sometimes it's hard to follow who's saying what. Otherwise, I love it, but I'm so sad you killed Bryant.

Wow great story read it all to the end. I think its good and really sad that I almost cried at the end and I don't normally cry at stories but it was so good I let a tear escape.

so good. please tell me that was not the end. i will die.

aw, this is so sad! What'd ya have to kill him off for?

wtf is wrong with this kid why did he hit her?

good story btw

Great story, but how did Bryant and Avrils mom die? Well, keep writing!