|Reviews for Surreal Reality|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
very itneresting.. a tad confusing... nice repition!
| Teacup Majoram chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
I like how the poem makes the reader think. The lines are kinda choppy though, and makes it hard to read.
| unjaundiced chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
that was beautiful. seems like an impossibility, don't it. living in a world at peace with everyone tolerating and accepting everyone.
you have to help the world you're living in now, because.. even though you might have many more lives, this is the one you're currently living.
you have a lot of hope for this world. i hope you never lose that