Reviews for The Stain
myheartiswaypastbeating chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
The poem is great...not sure I agree with you, but you make excellent points. caliorbust
Unfairy chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
War should never be the price of freedom. However, we're bound to what we think works, and war seems to have worked before, look at the American Revolution. Then again, that was a different time, when people weren't concious about these things as to not use war. Can peace be achieved? It is hard to say, especially with all the ignorance in the world.
Lady M22 chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
i like it alot! keep up the good work!
loz chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Amazing imagery of the red against the out of curiosity where were your poems published.I really like your style of poetry its so .Loz
Cuba Rhodes Vance chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Nice. You reviewed me, so I checked you out, and this is my favorite. I can't articulate what I like so much, but I like it a lot.

It's nice knowing I'm not alone.
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
i like the repition, it works well in your poem, very effective. well done :)
Misha34 chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
its good. I sounds very political. but good.