Reviews for Disturbing the Peace
TheOneAndOnly chapter 3 . 8/9/2004
Awe, I love Ezra. So sweet. Loved the chapter. Update soon.
Giddies chapter 3 . 8/8/2004
Oh loving the new story :) its less dark and edgy then the other ones, and its kind of a nice change. So keep writing! Im excited!
Whistle chapter 3 . 8/7/2004
Good, good, GREAT! I'm totally drawn. Please update soon!
JoeyLi chapter 3 . 8/6/2004
m...Ezra sounds too good to be true hm...we'll see we'll see.
loving Deakon more and more and more
stepbrother, so what. he sounds sexy D haha
anyway, nice chapter, no much happening, so hoping for more next chapter!
great so far. D keep it up
contin. soon -D
hypnotic-babe chapter 3 . 8/6/2004
i love it! Interesting choices for names, i like em. And if i had to choose between the 3 guys i wouldn't pick noah cuz hes a jackass, i probably wouldn't pick Ezra cause there's just something about's like he's TOO nice or something. I would definately pick deakon, he seems so mysterious and interesting. lol Anyway i hope you update soon, im really looking forward to reading more. Peace.
eccentricxrose chapter 3 . 8/6/2004
Congrats on another great chapter, as always. I've been working on getting my stuff up.. so I'll keep you posted on when that gets up. I'm working on a few novels but I want to get a few more chapters done before I actually post them.
I really like the characters in this story. And I loved how you showed a more sensitive side of Ezra by having him babysit his brother and sisters. Great touch to the story! I can't wait to see what happens next chapter when he actually teaches her how to surf!
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Midnight Owl chapter 3 . 8/6/2004
Ah! i heart deakon... but he's like... her stepbrother, so it's a little gross. unless i misinterpreted it. he IS her stepbrother right?.. lol. ezra seems cool too. and it's cute how he's so good with kids and his siblings. that's adorable. Aw. Boys should be good to their little siblings- if only for the fact taht girls like it. lol. anyways, it seems that reagen(sp?) is starting to get a little sick of her friends (Mia?). maybe i'm (once again) misinterpreting it. lol. erm- please please PLEASE PLEASE update soon. lol. and would you mind checking out my story pyro-princess? i'd love your feedback on it! thanks if you do.. if not that's cool.
S.W.H chapter 2 . 8/5/2004
I like! Need more! Have Reagan kick Naomi's ass!
natmarie chapter 2 . 8/4/2004
I like the rich kid/skater tension. Great dialogue in there, very realistic. And another guy enters into the mix. This is getting very very interesting. Do keep writing it, even if it doesn't just stay a summer thing!
natmarie chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
I really like this idea. It's not one that you see often, and sounds like it totally has potential, lots of it, for being as awesome as the rest of your stuff. I swear you should get published your stuff is that amazing. Sorry this sounds like I'm kissing butt, but I so mean it. Again, very good plot and character development this actually sounds like a TV show. Noah sounds super cool,and this soon to be step-brother does too. Lucky girl. Off to read the next chapter.
Midnight Owl chapter 2 . 8/4/2004
This is such a great story! I love Deakon's character... and Ezra seems cool too. Reagen reminds me alot of your character from Priceless (which was so amazing! i just read the final chapter and i'm so glad that she ended up with blank! i was dying when i thought that it was a sad ending!) Anyways, this is an amazing story and i hope you keep up with it. Update it soon for me please?
tickledblue chapter 2 . 8/4/2004
wow. this is really good. i like your characters, especially reagan. update soon!
dhrey chapter 2 . 8/4/2004
Damn love your story, i have a feeling this is gonna be good keep going.
Ephemeral Seraphim chapter 2 . 8/3/2004
A very nicely written story. The emotions and characters are well-evoked, and writing from different perspectives if a very difficult ability to obtain. It would be interesting how this story turns out. Keep up the good work. Hasta luego.
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