Oops. I didn't realize there was another chapter here, for a moment there. I'm tired, mind you.
Anyway, Erza sounds hot. Why do I get the feeling that Reagan and Erza will get involved with each other somehow. I wonder why Deakon hates his mother.
Keep writing! _

I wonder where Reagan and Deakon are going. M. Sounds like they had a slight, fleeting connection. This sounds good so far. Spontaneous writing is always a good thing. It helps give you ideas. _~
Update soon!

Fights are good and cute guys are even better. Glad you're continuing this cause I like it. The mind of a teenage girl, without making it sound bad, that's hard to do, in 1st at least. And the detail is really good, so please, update soon!
Later,
~Ffuffy~

I really like this story so far. I kind of like the name Reagan... not something I would think of. Ezra sounds hot. Ha.
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You've had a lot happen in two chapters, how long are you planning this to be? I'll be sure to check in for updates.
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Stephanie

no no no! Definately dont stop writing this story. It started off a bit slow, and I must say that I'm not crazy about Naomi. She doesn't seem real. She uses steriotypes WAY too much and it just doesn't seem right? Idk. Anyway, you've got my attention. I'm curious to see who she'll choose and what will happen next. I want to know if she'll get in trouble for sneaking out.. after all, she did come back with a mark.
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Christie

Great update! Add the next chapter soon!

You are amongst the most talented writers on this site. It's amazing how you can write from so many different perspectives. Your characters are never the same. You come up with interesting ideas and convey meaningful messages. The human emotion is always so well portrayed. Please do finish this story. By September would be awesome. :D Updating soon would make me very happy!

oh i wonder how long noah and reagan will last...hmm...oh well. update soon

Glad you decided to continue...it would be shame for you to deprive us of your writing skills. Summer thing huh? So does that mean it'll be a short story? Reagan's experience reminds of all the parties I went to in college...in California (many nights spent with bonfires on the beach and houses with skate ramps in the back). Ah...I can just smell the marijauna now...It was fun reminiscing, but I can't say that I ever had someone punch me. I'd love to bounce ideas off with you if you're feeling stuck and not sure if you want to continue...which I mentioned above...would be a shame. *smile* Till next time ~ BK

Hey again, I'm really glad you decided to update, even if you're only going to write it for the summer. It's really, really good. Sometimes I can't get into stories, but this one I'm really into. Update soon, I can't wait to see what Reagan and Ezra do together next.
Laura

m, this sounds like another great story for me to follow.
haha...
your characters so far sound great. Reagan is cool, same name as my mentor. yay. ahah
Deakon, suits his physical appearance since his personality is not exactly out in the open yet.
can't wait for more chapters D great start. keep going
joey

Ha...fabulous. I can't wait for the update! I really don't have any critiques. The characters have been introduced wonderfully and Deakon sounds like a little goth hottie! Who's this friend of his...funny that the story takes place in Irvine. I have frequented there several times. Always fun to read a story in a setting that you're familiar with. I'm in the process of reading the first chapter of Malcom too...looking forward to the update.

Hey, a new story! That's fantabulous (which seems like it shouldn't be a word, but it's in the song "Moon Dance" so now I'm not so sure), as I have liked all of your stories thus far. Though you have so many. *cries*

A nice start. I'm a little squicked out by the summary (those step-brother

I'm absolutely in love with this story. Abso-fucking-lutely in love with it. It seems so FUN and not packed full of TEH ANGST!1! WOE! Not that you're stories are always packed full of angst, but look at the rest of us. Hell, angst is practically my middle name. But, anyway, back on subject: I adore Reagan. For some reason, she jsut really cracks me up. I always love your characters, as they have the ability to make me laugh, frown, be happy, be sad, whatever. But I love Reagan especially, and that's only just after one chapter. And no more "shit" refrences to your writing, I will have to hurt you if you don't stop!
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Am eagerly awaiting the next chapter you know. *sits patiently*
Cheers
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Winged One

Hey! I've been following basically all of your stories; some of them finished, some not. I liked this one, but not as much as some of the others. It's okay so far, and I'd love to follow along with it to see exactly where you're going with it. Some of the drama has got to do with Deakon's friend, otherwise, I doubt you would have Reagan going along. And I do see some foreshadowing with Mia's party. I could be wrong, but I like to predict.
Congrats on another great chapter, of course!
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Christie