Reviews for Disturbing the Peace |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. I love Ezra. Deakon's not so bad either, it was nice how he kinda stood up for her. A lovely chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay. the 'i subconciously trust you because i slept in the same bed as you but we didn't sleep together'. it wasn't used freakishly early so it fits completly. glad to see you updated. luv hannah banana |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw what a good chapter. Drama...very nice. Update soon, k? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo for Ezra! Boo for Noah! Woo for Deakon! Boo for Mike and Kate! Woo for Mia! Woo for Ezra and Reagan! Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great chapter! I love this story, so update with more soon :) - Wynter |
![]() ![]() I don't really like Reagan. The story is okay update soon! |
![]() ![]() Sweet! And so much DRAMA! Well, hurry up and update so I can read what happens. Later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ha, i knew i didnt' like naomi! (watch me be all tough and intimidating to a made up character, i'm so cool!) anyway, great chapter, glad to see you updated this. luv hannah banana |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.u.c.h. I can't really say I expected Noah and Naomi to be doing the dirty. Truthfully, I had forgotten about Naomi until you brought her back up. Meh. If she was banging Noah at the time of their encounter, I guess I can understand why Naomi was so hissy. I know this review sucks, but bear with me...I was in a car for 9 hours today . I'm tired. Update all your stories soon! Jess |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, can't say that I wasn't expecting that little last line there, but you timed it well, excellent effect. I'm also impressed with how much the story has improved since the first chapter. You're characters are fantastic! Wonderful story, wonderful writing, I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really coming to love this story. I wonder about Reagan though...eh, playing around with too many guys? But it makes the story interesting, and your writing is rather superb, so it's a pleasure to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I have to say that I am rather liking this story. Your words are very effective at pulling the reader in. Cute story so far. I will continue soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, dialogue is great and I already see the semblance of developing characters through your excellent writing. It does seem very stereotyped though, everyone seems very stuck away in their groups. Good story so far, I will continue to read as soon as I can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() -gasps- Noah is suck a jackass! Grr... I really hope Reagan gets with Ezra now... |
![]() ![]() ![]() It just keeps on getting better. I really like this fic, and can't wait for you to finish it! Awesome chapter, I never did like Noah anyway... Callie |