Reviews for I Thought I Heard a Bomb Drop
mistressKC chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
your poem speaks the truth - SO MUCH!
grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
Truly gripping. The repetition is highly effective and left a profound impression on my imagination.
Dee corbell chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
strong, intense, great view, tough subject to swallow, great way of interpreting it into poetry...
dustytiger chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
this peice is wicked! the symbolism is amazing, the images it conjures for me wow!
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
In your poem, the fact that you both began and ended on the last two lines is very effective.
I thought i saw babies, thrown on spears
But it was only a soldier
Dying in his young years
woh! very very strong and meaningful
AmethystPisces chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
Bravo! Another raw and powerful piece. Damn this is amazing. Speak your mind loudly!