Reviews for Deceive
Aelux chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
I TOTALLY didn't expect the last two stanzas, such a switch... it's almost as if you were portraying the dawn on a battlefield... You ended it flawlessly. You have such an affinity for word choice and flow... Wow.
Kiran S chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
omg that was amazing! very well written and the imagery was descirbed beautifully! excellent job. u hav a real talent for writing!