Reviews for Life ain't a batch of roses
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
how true.
you bring out your
perspective well.
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
very true! i couldn't agree with you more on this one. by the way, i particularly enjoyed the lines:
"That life ain't a batch of roses
Life has it's ups and downs
Life is what you make it
I guess that's why I frown".
Very powerfully done. Thanks for sharing and keep writing!
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
Again. This is another great one. Everyone gets into their depressed moments. You can tell I am just reading my poetry. Never let a mood get you out of writing. It's a good way to express yourself and that's how you come of with great works such as this. Awesomest. _
Viksy81 chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
I really like this poem. It has a nice flow
Raven Gray chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
again i know exactly how you feel trust me i do and i can really feel the sinister side of you when i read this keep up the good work!