T-T *sniff*Wow Bree... I didn't know you did is so... Well I want to say cool and pretty... they're not really words I'd usually use to describe a poem, but this is cool. It's comforting (though it's not adressed to me) and well written. I might have kept the word "Temporary" on the same line as "such things are only" but I see why you didn't.

It's time I reviewed this, if only to say thankyou. This poem was a turning point for me. I still miss you, but it isn't as bad as i imagined it would be. and you are right, we aren't really apart. well, not as far as i feared. yeah. not sure if this is making sense. Bye then, 'til later. Ama

Ooh...that was really nice. I found that it had a lot of imagery...got some really clear pictures in my head...good feeling! Awesome job!

Wow, Grey, you really CAN write poetry... I'm out of words, it was too beautiful. It has a point of sadness mixed with hope that makes it touch one's heart.

pretty good. Really good friends can make you feel that way