Reviews for Diamond Wings
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
This is a really beautiful poem and reminds me of some things, or maybe just one thing, that I've written. It's powerful and beautiful and I often wish this. Very nice job.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
i liked that, well done!
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Gorgeous poem! My wings are made of glass, too. I sometimes wish I was as hard as diamonds so that I could go through life without any pain, but it's sensitive people like us who possess a good heart and can write wondrous poetry. Two thumbs up! b_d
Eirien chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
Ohh, this is so beautiful. It sapoke straight into my heart. I can relate so well. The message sounds like stuff my father keeps telling me, that I have to become harder and less sensitive etc., but this poem puts it much more nicely. ;-) I love the rhythm and rhyme scheme, and especially the image of the wings, it is so fragile in itself, and those last two lines, they are so sincere and beautiful, I just love them. Wonderful piece. This is going on my favourites.