Reviews for Adolescent Dreams
Sat Hari chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
Very strong poem, in a different way than most. Loved it.
Rionarayne chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
I love your poetry! I've been reading some other writers' poems and so far, I like your style the best. The meter isn't stretched or anything, and I think that's very refreshing to find.
Rionarayne
LaMSaErArNier chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
hmm..this is exelent, I'm surprised it doesnt have more reviews...I love the idea behind this, and its very well writen, great job
neunundneunzig chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
Hey, thanks for reviewing.
I really like the repetition here, especially in the last few lines, and the way you've mixed the words together. It kind of gives off a nostalgia vibe. It also gives enough information so that you know vaguely what it's about but leaves enough out to allow the images to become personal.
A.D Williams chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
I liked this poem. It's very descriptive, but also gives the reader room to think.
great work
-Amber