Reviews for Betrayal
alsdjf chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Anni: Wow, that's kind of a depressing one.
Sao: By the way, you wrote "Right in my bad", did you mean "back" by any chance? Thought I'd let you know.
~Sao & Anni
candyratt chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
This is incredible, beautiful, and deep. So deep, that I could almost feel the pain you had. Keep writing poetry.