| Reviews for Lizzie Batze |
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   downforthecount chapter 3 . 8/10/2004 I don't really like this story. The characters don't seem very realistic. I'm guessing that you were talking to tthe Master of Pies and Pina Coladas when you got the idea for this story. The story could use more detail and I saw a few grammatical errors. Over all I don't know if this has a very good plot. Might I suggest revising it? |
| a-person-01 chapter 3 . 7/26/2004 Loved the chapter! I only have one complaint, the chapters are kind of short. I do it too, and I don't like really long chapters either (I'm so picky!) but if you could make them longer, that'd be better. Of course, you update faster than like, everyone, so that makes up for it! |
| a-person-01 chapter 2 . 7/25/2004 Loved the chapter! Thanks for updating so soon! |
| Master of Pie and Pina Coladas chapter 2 . 7/24/2004 You absolutely had to steal my idea, huh? Good story! |
| CJ Jazzy chapter 1 . 7/22/2004 Interesting...keep it up! |
| a-person-01 chapter 1 . 7/21/2004 Ooh, creepy ending! I love your story, you MUST update soon! |