Reviews for Your Lightning Falls
darthelwig chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
I love this poem... very Lightning. i like the "your lightning falls" thing and also the line "Your every hurt I’ve prepared my heart to take"... very cool. sweet.
Blue chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
Beautiful...beautiful...Keep up the excellent writing.
Karma Fish chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
It seems like this is written straight from the heart. I like the "lightning falls" metaphor too.