Reviews for Rain, Rain
shadow-spirit chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
i really like how u used the nursery rihym juxtaposed against your own words - so different but then almostshowing simalarities when set agains what you wrote - almost creepy - powerfull
S.S.Harry chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
wow. sad, but wow. I actually feel peaceful in the rain. One of the only times I get restful sleep, it makes me very calm.
SleepDontWeep chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
the darling jaded girl- nice!
this poem is very emotional and unique!
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eyluvmusic chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
I love your writing style on the poem. WELL DONE!
greenbanana chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
Was I the only one scared by that? Or do you also find nursery rhymes unnaturally creepy? Well, that was a good poem. I liked how you used some lines everyone knows. Made it seem like it would be remembered by the reader for longer.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
nice poem and an awesome idea!
very nice description of depressed ppl
twistedtruths chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
I liked that. I like how you tied real life into a nursery ryme.
Aleara conlin chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
This was really creative and really quite beautiful. Great poem :)
Karma Fish chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
Nice juxtaposition of the childhood rhyme with depression. The "rain rain" part really brings out the angst.