Reviews for What It's All About |
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Jala the Purple chapter 1 . 8/5/2004 Okay for starters. Long poem. Second of all waste of time. This poem really bites. Why did you write this? Are you that desperate to tell some poor helpless boy or girl possibly that you are stalking something? If so give up the lame poetry act and just tell them. Talk about childish.. |
oh frenzy chapter 1 . 7/22/2004 This poem is kewl! This is probably the longest poem youve ever wrote! Thats a good thing tho lol the longer the better! Lol keep up the good work! |
God's Last Muffin chapter 1 . 7/22/2004 Deciding to read this was a huge mistake. This so-called poem is a travesty. Your mentally challenged author's note isn't even seperated from the "poem". You were correct when you said that this is poorly written, also your strange obsessional fear of getting what you call "flames" is both irrational and annoying. Any person who can read this redundant piece of garbage and gives you a good review is either as stupid as you seem to be or just trying to give you some self esteem. I'm sorry to say i am neither and when I read a poem that is as blatantly horrible as this one I will voice my opinion. May I ask you to do a favor for humanity and the English language and never write poetry again. Thank you for your time. |
EternalTimexX chapter 1 . 7/22/2004 a bit repetetive, but its pretty good... ~*Keep writing*~ |
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 7/22/2004 hm...a little bit too matter-of-fact but you have definitely put a great deal of hard work and effort into this. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |