|Reviews for One thing left to do|
| Julien chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
i like your use of elements (night, clouds, etc) your closing is a little anti-climatic, but anti-climatic to your advantage
| genesys chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
I love this poem. The imagery is great and the juxtaposition of some of the words really makes you thing. It struck a core with me!
| deepdown chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
bittersweet. this just flows so well, the rhymes are unforced, the words so well chosen, everything about it is just so beautiful. keep up the very good work
| Three Cornered Hat chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Interesting poem. It has a nice rhythm to it. I like it.
| EternalTimexX chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
i... i... i'm speechless, i really do like this... ~Keep writing, you have a real talent