Reviews for One thing left to do
Julien chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
i like your use of elements (night, clouds, etc) your closing is a little anti-climatic, but anti-climatic to your advantage
genesys chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
I love this poem. The imagery is great and the juxtaposition of some of the words really makes you thing. It struck a core with me!
deepdown chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
bittersweet. this just flows so well, the rhymes are unforced, the words so well chosen, everything about it is just so beautiful. keep up the very good work
Three Cornered Hat chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Interesting poem. It has a nice rhythm to it. I like it.
EternalTimexX chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
i... i... i'm speechless, i really do like this... Keep writing, you have a real talent