ok i've spent the past 2 and 1/2 hours reading this gah and now i have to wait until you update. please make it soon i can't help the anxiety building up inside of me :D aha

Omg... like you need to finish this story, pronto.. it's really good!

Just found this story and I love it!

Has it really been more than three years since you last updated? I hope that doesn't happen, because I really would like to see how everything plays out between Ash and Dean.

Reread the story and yep i def still like it and am interested to see where it goes. hopefully u'll update soon

this is such an awesome story!

i really hope you continue it and update soon, because i'm VERY curious to read what happens on the ride over the the airport.

keep up the great work!

Is it too much to hope that you'll finish this one day? It's a great story!

Heyhow are ya? whats been going on? i miss your story! i have read it about a hundred times! hope you are wellhope to read some new stuff soon

I really love your story I'm not completely sure how many times i've read it but i read it over and over again I would probably have to say its my favourite story on fictionpress and that you are a truly fantastic writer! and that i really hope that you complete or update the story soon because you have me on the edge of my seat just wanting more! In more or less words I've fallen in love with your story and i know that sometimes completing a story and be really hard especially with everything that happens in someones life and all the stress and work and friends, family, guys etc but i really hope that you finish this story and it dosnt just become a lost cause like lots of stories on fictionpress because your story is really something...! -Kate xoxoif you ever want to chat you can e-mail me at

lurve da fic

The idea may be slightly cliché... But you've done a great job pulling it off into an interesting story. I'm glad you didn't have Ash go through endless denial because that gets tiring but I think she decided she liked Dean more than friend a little too quickly. The evolving friendship part of the deal is great so don't change a thing about that.

I'm glad you don't show Dean's point of view because it ruins the point, doesn't it? That way the reader, like Ash, doesn't know for certain what Dean thinks, or what any of the other characters do for that matter. In this story it is probably better that way.

So, I like what I've read so far. Update as soon as possible.

GREAT story! I have one thing to say...when you "You're going to the store with Dean and I" is wrong the way you use the word I...it should be me instead. Luv ur story! POST VERY SON! like in 3 days...lol jk!

she's so cool for doing photography! omg, its amazing. i love photography, its my passion! anyways, please please please update. and if you're not going to, can you just tell us that you're not goign to finsih the story because i keep checking hoping that you will update! argh! its driving me crazy

update now! please please please

oh and i forgot to mention, i'm sorry about your friend. it was a beautiful tribute that you wrote to him.

holy crap, i declare this one of the best stories in all of fictionpress. i absolutely love love love it. it's really underrated as far as reviews go. but then again WHY HAVE YOU STOP UPDATING? its been a year i noticed, and you only have 8 chapters. they're wonderful chapters but still! please continue the story so that i won't have to be forced to abandon my new found favorite piece on FP