Reviews for The World Today
Moon Drops chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Not bad. It seems that you're unsure of what the people are thinking. A little vague, though. Perhaps adding some visual detail would make it easier to understand.
Dee corbell chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
You are the only person in this world who can decipher the rights and wrongs. You must decide as a person, for if someone else chooses, you are no longer living. To live is to take a chance, and ride along for the concequences. I loved this though, this is just my pov.
holocaustpulp chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
I agree with the poem - it's only our conception of right and wrong which compels us to "liberate" and whatnot. The questions presented a good, thoughtful piece, but I would've suggested explaining who specifically has the power to choose right and wrong. Just an idea. I loved this message.