|Reviews for No Title Yet Would Appreciate Suggestions|
| darkdemonsunday chapter 2 . 8/27/2005
How about "Masked Individuality" for a title or "Identification"?
| darkdemonsunday chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
this is very excellent writing. I just have one suggestion, try to seperate the paragraphs a little moreto make it easier to read.
| AlienCultist chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
quite excellent indeed... wow their 8 ft tall... quite scary... anyway i have absolutely no idea what to name it... naming is not a thing i am good at... took me 5 months to come up with my books name n im still not very happy with it...
| Meco chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
That was very well done.
The main character and story's environment are both equally fascinating.
I think a better description of the individuals of this society would be that they are 'introverts', not'anti-social'. After all, introvertness is simply a different form of social interaction, and I have difficulty imagining any civilization composed of totally anti-social persons.
I eagerly await any further additions.