Reviews for Abu Ghraib
JPRom chapter 4 . 12/23/2006
very nice use of imagery in the compilation of the three "Short the Battle—Long the Wait"s. I can imagine myself being in that same mystical time period.

An enjoyed reading, indeed.
simpleplan13 chapter 38 . 10/21/2006
I like this.. I think this is one your bests.. the repition is great and the point is awesome...great piece :)
simpleplan13 chapter 37 . 10/21/2006
I like the dont think about it line.. great descriptions and well done
simpleplan13 chapter 36 . 10/18/2006
Im not sure if i like it better without that last line or not... the whole saying youll kill him thing reiterates the point, but I like it in two lines better...
simpleplan13 chapter 35 . 10/18/2006
I love that description of hate... great job
simpleplan13 chapter 34 . 10/18/2006
I really love that first stanza and the last one... powerful piece
simpleplan13 chapter 33 . 10/1/2006
very true and well written
simpleplan13 chapter 32 . 9/24/2006
I like this... well done
simpleplan13 chapter 31 . 9/10/2006
very cool... powerful and well done
Princess-anna57 chapter 36 . 9/9/2006
Wow. It's shortness is just so powerful. "Emotion that pollutes all pure desire" - I heart that line! It just says so much in so few words. Excellent, keep writing your amazing work!

Anna _
Ash of Lynne chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
Very good! I don't know that I can critize that one at all. Thanks for reviewing my "The Faeries"
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 32 . 8/21/2006
How ethereal.
poetic abortion chapter 11 . 8/20/2006
The last line makes my heart ache and just, strong subject with equally strong lines and I love how you use the words tragic, you make it a whole subject and - this is quite lovely.

* Noelle
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 31 . 8/15/2006
I like the variations in tone.
simpleplan13 chapter 29 . 3/24/2006
very niec and sadly true
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