|Reviews for Abu Ghraib|
| simpleplan13 chapter 28 . 3/23/2006
lol.. love that third stanza
| simpleplan13 chapter 27 . 3/21/2006
| A Once Dead Poet chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Wonderful emotion is invoked!You do well with these.
But in a non-metrically restricted form, I love this. The way you use the old names of the area to bring a sense of feeling and nostalgia of the area's returning past is wonderful. I wish I could give you more constructive criticism but your complexity and thought is far above the level of any other poet I have ever read from.
| botmasta chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
It's really good.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 26 . 12/16/2005
Very ostentatious, of course purposely, and definitely makes your point.
| simpleplan13 chapter 26 . 10/22/2005
powerful and well done
| Mrs Fiend chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 25 . 9/9/2005
To be impartial is a danger to those around and yourself - although can be intensely debated. Respect also is needed when opinions differ, although in the case of insanity, action is taken and humanity is forgotten.
| simpleplan13 chapter 25 . 9/9/2005
I liek the third stanza
| simpleplan13 chapter 24 . 7/21/2005
powerful and well written
| simpleplan13 chapter 23 . 7/18/2005
powerful adn true.. awesome poem
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 24 . 7/13/2005
I love the method of that last stanza, and the last line is very final.
| Sara Celeste chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
wow you're written tons of poems, but they're really good. Hard to understand a little for me, but I guess that's just my young, thirteen year old mind.
| this is britt chapter 5 . 4/21/2005
ah. by far, my favorite. really just pure truthful brilliance.
| this is britt chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
the contrast strikes me. I want to cry too. it is beautiful. I forgot how beautiful your words are. too beautiful for words, perhaps.