Reviews for The Outcast
A Different Kind of Yellow chapter 26 . 8/31/2013
Hey Leena, still love this story after all this time! Had to go back now that someone is starting up a story just like it! Check my faves. See you on fb sometime! Kirsty xx
Aphrodithe chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I love it! I'm adding you to my community!
Alanisaur chapter 9 . 5/7/2012
I've been trying to read your story, because the concept sounds really awesome, but your format just sucks. There are no paragraphs, bad punctuation, & barely any spacing. Its too much for me to endure & i sadly have to say that i've given up on your story.

best of luck
philosophyluver chapter 3 . 2/17/2012
I never thought I would meet another desi on here. Do you pride yourself on being a writer?
Princess Mariana chapter 26 . 4/23/2011
Amazing!
dipintheriverstyx chapter 26 . 1/7/2011
I thought it was really good and cute.
XxXKBXxX chapter 10 . 12/17/2010
Yay! A chapter with spaces _
XxXKBXxX chapter 9 . 12/17/2010
I think this story is really good but I found it hard to read, the writing was so crammed together. No offense but I think that you should rewrite the chapters like the first one with spaces and in paragraphs._
Funky-Socks chapter 6 . 11/15/2010
I just stopped trying to read this...Its hard to tell whos talking.

I would fix it up if I were you...just some constructive criticism for you.
Funky-Socks chapter 5 . 11/15/2010
i think this wud be considerably better if you used the "enter button" every once in a while!...i cant read it like this
Funky-Socks chapter 4 . 11/15/2010
um...ok...ch 4 had a WAY too long paragraph...it was hard to read
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