Reviews for Long Nails Tipped in Red
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
On a scale from one to ten. I'd give this a five.-. _ *Breacks out laughing* Nah ! I'm kiddin ! XD Really I'd give this an elevan. (Would've been more but I only have elevan fingers...Oo WTF ! Whered that come from ? Oh ya...Sugar...Dam you.) Oh and as a coicidence I was listening to Hotel California while reading. Xp ! Xo Me go night night. *Passes out.*
a e i o u and sometimes y chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
Creepy. I like your style. Keep it up.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
wow.. very creepy... awesome descriptions... I especially love hte chorus/refrain
Anon chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Wow. Really super super good.
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
sounds like a song and i especially like the chorus,
long nails tippied in red
to hide the stains of blood
i am the only one running
when its everyone else that should
wash your body carefully
erase the years of sin
yet no milky skin will hide the fact
that you're still evil within
keep writing! .
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
haha i was always scared of long red nails... anyway, this WAS really scary, but i liked your use of imagery and other descriptive devices. Great work!
penumbral chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
Whoa. I'm so blown away...this is definitely in my favorites! The imagery is so, so stunning, you can SEE whats going on, violently beautiful...I'd give a better comment, but my mind is completely dry.
Yours in awe,
jalisco-psyche
EternalTimexX chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
different, but i like your style of writing. keep writing