Reviews for These Are the Days of Our Lives
Hebe chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Hey!

Just a bit of concrit~

This was a little hard to understand with all the names in! I get lost from it so easily, there's like 14 characters suddenly being introduced!

It would help if you paced them out a bit, or cut down on them just a titch~~
The great disappointment chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
This is good-very cool. Please update it soon! Yeah yeah, this is a lame review, I know but it was all I could think of to say.