Reviews for The Haunting
melodyrose9 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
This is really good! This is so short...hence haiku, but leaves you with an eerie feeling. Nice job!
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
that's haunting me now... creepy! But really good job on this, I like it :)
Disturbed Insomniac chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Very nice
outruntheavalanche chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
i love this. the last line is what does it for me.
Gevo chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
creepy... I love the imagery... Especially the last line...
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
great haiku. well written, nice imagery, sent chills down my back. i like this. :)
scary miss mary chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Hey, thanks for your reviews. I really appreciate your kind words. :)
I love this. The last line is very sinister and chilling.
Great work.
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
eep! *hides behind Ed Girl* haha! What is realy creepy is that as I read that I am listenign to Cocteau Twin's "Tenderbox of a Heart" where part of the song has her whispering part of the lyrics! O_O Thanks for all the reviews, too! *cheesy smile* really, they made my day! Work is really busy, adn so it makes me lazy at home so I've not bee nreading poems. I am going to try to read your new ones! wish me luck! lol