Augh! He winked at her and licked his lips! That's just sadistic and cruel.

I think I would have been frozen in shock, unable to move and all, for twenty minutes. I'd be baffled. Seriously.

But yeah... Poor Kaela.

I like that part in the beginning when it goes “ I have to fucking eat, you shit head — now stop bitching at me! ” LOL...I LOVED THAT

Aww?

that was intensely disturbing, very wrong and rather well written...kudos

I figured it was something like cannibalism (when I was reading the middle part). _ I like hanibal lectar, you see.

Your style of narrating, unfortunately, made me forget the horrors of eating other people. (that's a good thing, by the way)

So, yeah, I love this. :insert heart here:

I tried to make a friend of mine read this (because I started feeling out of place because I was the only one in our class who likes to read a lot.) She said she likes it, but she doesn't like reading too much... because it's boring -she says reading is boring not your story.-

I like Chase's name. It's so... uhh... I dunno.

Okay, well, that's it, I guess.

With (a lot of) Love,



PS.

Could you... uhh... review my one-shot story, "Medication"? But it's okay if you don't, but you should know, you inspired me to write it.

\(*_*)/ huggies~

Awesome story, well writing and an original idea. I loved it.

I would've gone for Chase though x']

Sed.. Chase NO! I'm confused.

I will not believe that Sed is a canibal. He sounds too cute X_X.

I love it how Tracy dives to the floor everytime XD. Love the story!

Twisted, twisted, twisted, TWISTED, SO twisted. But I still loved it. How do you come up with such ideas? Cannibalism. Freakin' cannibalism. I'd have never guessed. My jaw hit the floor when I found out. You're really good at leading your readers by nose. I was just as confused as she was. First, I believed Sed, then I believed Chase, then Sed again and I was bouncing back and forth until he trapped her in his car, that asshole.

I was kinda surprised because of the lack of romance in the story. Or rather lack of a pert of romance, like she has never thought who she loved Sed or Chase. Or even who she wanted to be with. The idea of love never crossed her mind through entire story. And that was slightly strange. And I still can't figure out who she loves. Well, she slept with Sed, but she helped Chase, even though he wanted to eat her. And she didn't want to let him go, he was the one that forced her to. That's really confusing. But I suppose that's a part of twisted stories?

Speaking about twisted (again), the ending was totally twisted. I thought that one of them would eventually turn out to be the bad guy. But we just get a slightly bad guy, and less bad guy. They're both quite likable. And he confessed at the end. That was somehow sad. Strange thing is that it didn't make me cry (and I cry while watching Lion King). But it was somehow nostalgic.

And your main character. God, wasn't she crazy. I didn't get her at all. I think we had too small insight in her emotions. She said what she and the others were doing, but she didn't say what she was thinking or feeling. And that utterly confused me. And she could act so unbelievably silly, that I wanted to strangle her, screaming 'God, girl, what the fuck is wrong with you?' And her giggling habit was so annoying. And she freaked out too little when she found out that they were cannibals. And I didn't really like her overall. I think that Katlyn's character (from Contract I and II (which are the best stories I've read in my life, and I'll love you forever and ever for writing them, if you publicize I'm SO gonna buy it)) was way better. But I guess she was fine.

Sorry for the rambling. I just feel like it.

Dang...

He licked her. :O

That was kind of hot. LOL.

It started out really good. This is why I don't like love traingles. . . I loved Chase's character despite him being fucked up. Oh well, the story was good, ending depressing. For me. So I'm just going to go and read happy stories right now! Ja ne!

I hope Chase is telling the truth. I don't really like Sed. . . I was sad that she lost her virginity to HIM. Wa! Oh well. lol. Wow the whole, I eat people made me think 'Black Christmas' lol!

Oi! I LOVE Chase's character! You do really well with your male characters. So interesting. . . are these the kind of guys you're into? I wonder. . . good chapter! Feel free to PM me since you're already done with this!

Ha ha, Tracy is such a weird girl! Spying on people when they undress. He must feel so violated. But hey he should know that when you're hot you close the curtains! lol I bet he likes it when Kaela watches though! Flattery can get you everywhere!Chase, what a weird name for a boy. Liking this story so far. .~