Reviews for Chronos EO: Omni Prospect V1
Xerro chapter 4 . 10/22/2004
Sorry it took me so long to review, i had blown my pc up, but it's working again now so i'm back.
Once again the fight scenes are enthralling to read, it's very decriptive and pretty precise in what happens. I'm still now completely clear on the story, but i was pretty much mindboggled by the length of it. It took a while to read. I mean that chapter was what 20 words at least? Anyway good chapter i hope you update soon. I'm sure a lot more people will come to read your story, when they realise just how well you've written it.
Xerro chapter 3 . 9/6/2004
Sorry it took so long to review your story. I've been busy, but i'm here now. I've got a few things to say. One it is awesome. The way you describe characters, objects and fights is really good, you integrate it all well together. I can also say the way your writing it in a cinematography way is good. It's a style i haven't seen before and it's good, don't lose it. The story itself sounds interesting, yes there are one or two things that seem unclear at the moment, but i know that'll clear up as the story goes on. I'm looking forward to the next chapter so please do update soon.
Terryll Preston chapter 3 . 8/25/2004
A very interesting and engrossing style of writing - done from a cinematic angle and perspective? Definitely an original style (at least, I haven't seen it tried on this site before)! The flow of your story was pretty good and the characterization was spot on. Overall, I would say for you to continue. If you don't, I'll sic Chibi on you! Hah-hah! But seriously, please continue on to the next chapter! If a story is good enough for me to ask for a next chapter, then you know you should keep going.
See you next review!
HeavenDemon chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
Wow. I really like it so far. It's a little bit confusing, but not to the point that you can't figure out what's going on. Nice work.
Ephemeral Seraphim chapter 2 . 8/14/2004
Another nice chapter. I hope to see more. Anyway, I'd like to know if you want to join this writing group that I've been setting up. All you have to do is e-mail me with your approval. Hasta luego.
Ephemeral Seraphim chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
I like your description and writing style. Can't wait to see how this turns out. Keep up the good work. Hasta luego.
Curtis White chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
Promising story. Sounds like a manga that already exists. I can't remember the name at the moment.
Don't worry about that. Your story isn't too much alike. Keep it up!