|Reviews for Merciless|
| Lady Julianne chapter 4 . 8/9/2004
And our knowledge of Mercedes increases. I like that every chapter, we discover several new things about her life.
| Lady Julianne chapter 3 . 8/8/2004
Your characters are so interesting. I'm wondering what's going to happen between them that leads to her death. It's eldest brother not oldest brother
| kitty-mao-mao chapter 3 . 8/7/2004
another well done chapter! keep writing, i wanna know what happens next!
| Lady Julianne chapter 2 . 7/30/2004
You made me forget about the mysterious handsome stranger too! By the time I read the end, I was thinking 'What mysterious handsome stranger?'. Very effective, to distract the reader and then abruptly return to the previous focus.
| kitty-mao-mao chapter 2 . 7/29/2004
Well written as always...write, write, write!
| Adreena Nightingale chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
Hm, this sounds promising.
| KalliopesMuse chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
Great start to a new story. This one seems to have quite a mysterious quality. It sounds very interesting and I look forward to reading more. This is sort of how my fairy-tale story started out :)
| Lady Julianne chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
Really interesting character, the 'blessed' past makes me wonder how it all went wrong. I really want to know what the rest of the story is about.
Don't worry that it's too sketchy, I think that the sketchiness will draw people in, because they want to know the details.