Reviews for The World Within A Sea
shadowcat86 chapter 2 . 7/10/2007
The first chapter was kinda boring, you could've explained as we went along, not all at the beginning.

However, the real beginning was good, and although the chapter was short, I liked the ending, I enjoy reading more of this when you get the chance to continue.
Raven Gray chapter 2 . 8/25/2004
story is cute but chapter two is exactly the same as chapter one think u should fix that all i all though very cute n detailed keep up the good work
insert funky name chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
i really like it. can you email me when you update? email me at
FrozenTearDrops chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
OMG i Luv it KT its great. I so resemble Erecat lol. I absolutely love the story. it reminds me of Pylea, a demension from From the show Angel where there is a portal and stuff. cept in Pylea humans are servants and demons are rulers... its really kewl and so is your story its awesome i cant stop saying that lol. if you need any help or anything i would so give you suggestions if you want... love it lol bye!