Reviews for Empty Dreams
invalid id chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
Very good wording, love the idea. Good job.
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
This poem is sort of haunting to me. I like it. Great work!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
thats really sad!
good job though
Lauren Raven chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
This is really good. I like the oxymorons you use here; it creates a nice effect. Very well done; keep writing.