|Reviews for Light in Shadow|
| just dani chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
wow this is gorgeous. awesome imagery
| Stormie Greye chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Beautfilly written and nearly flawless in my eyes. Marvelous!
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
Dude that poem, was way good.
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
This is nice. Well written.
| shinco chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Ah, what a nice poem that was! No matter what, there's always at least a tiny flicker of hope even when all things seem out of whack completely and hopeless! Very nice message, and wonderfully written poem with very nice imagery! I LOVED IT BUNCHES! _
| Eyes Unclouded chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I liked the duality - how one stanza ended in darkness and the other in light (or hope, rather). The lines "A trace of hope/Worn but bright" had good imagery.
Simple and good.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
it's very lyrical, short but a great poem!
| eldrin chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
I love it. Your way with words...absolutely wonderful.
| Quebrada Angel chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Light... *trying to sort out what to say* *thinking very hard* all i can say is Wow... lightly and with so much respect.
| scudcrow chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
"Hope"-is most powerful when all seems to fail. The series seem to be connected by invisible dots in the wind...we know it's there, but can't always prove so!
| Diane Lynn chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
I like how you used short phrases, but were able to easily get the point across. I love the descriptiveness in this poem as well!
| Zeheria chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
CoolI like this it is very fast paced but in a way to the exact point while using detail. good work! Zeheria
| celentia-changingacconts chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
sort of every cloud has a silver lining huh! it's a good poem keep it up!
| another randomnobody chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
this is an awsome poem thanxs for the review on my war poem ps i am keeping up the great work just like you said although im not so sure if its all that great but your poems awsome keep up the great work to
| MexicanGirl chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
good peom you always need hope