|Reviews for Sugar Clouds|
| grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
Brilliant bonding with the sky.
| Emmytastic gal chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
wow. awesome composition. its sorta like you're describing a journey to me. although it isn't that long, its just enough to let us know of your thoughts. write on.
| sinner saint chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
The imagery in this is very nice indeed. I like this poem a lot and commend you because poetry is something I find very difficult personally. Well done!
| b likes to write chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
I think cloud shadows are the coolest. Im glad you mentioned them in this poem. This has a real beauty to it, descriptive not just of the scenery but your interaction with it. Also, you have a pretty sweet taste in music, but was your first concert really DMB in 94? Weren't you, like, 4 years old? Wow, I feel old now.
| Last Straw chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
I'll soak up the stars.
| pacopuppy chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
I liked it. Nice choice of words. Keep up the good work. I'll try to review the rest of your stuff.
| Mime chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
Excellent work! Your writing just gets better and better!
| Birdaloo chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
imagery... one of your most aparent talents. this one is a MASTERPIECE! its so beautiful! i can feel it almost in the air. STRAIGHT to my favorites list!
| freeyourself chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
yay! nice poem, i like clouds!
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
great job! the whole poem is nice and I like the last line too
| Mettie chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
Very good! I enjoyed reading this! I love the imagery and the concept of sugary secrets! Keep up the good work!