Reviews for Journey to Silcaeruleva
TheBlackDeath chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Wow, you werent kidding, what are the chances, you know? Awesome style of writing you have there, I like your very satisfying mix of dialogue and scene, makes your ideas seem tangible. Ill be watching your updates too! Ciao!
Islandbreeze chapter 3 . 4/11/2005
Nice story so far, I wonder who she is...? I like the pace at which you reveal little things about her, and also the part about the creature was a little creepy too, I could just see those azure eyes watching her...Shudder...anyway, the only constructive crit I have is that some parts can get a little choppy, but I have trouble with that too. Great characters btw, and really good start!
badgirl21 chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
great story so far! Update soon!