Reviews for Dagger in my Heart
Paste on Smile chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
woah. Hun this is deep stuff. Very very good. I like the way you got it to rhyme without it sounding silly. Nice!
Hermoics chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
I'm listening to Broken right now and it perfectly goes w/ this poem. I bow down to ur awesomeness. aneways Love Hermoics
Manju chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
awesome poem, i like the pace of it. i also like the las 2 verses but i don't understand the second line. great job, keep it up.
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
It's great, well done. I like the whole 'All work and no play' thing.