|Reviews for Her and her poems|
| Sweet Calamity chapter 1 . 11/21/2004
Wow. This was ... utterly amazing. The imagery, the arrangement, subject, word-choice, and I'm babbling. I can't pick out specific things that make this beautiful disturbing dark fluid, it just IS.
| Kelpylion chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
*double-blink.* That is an incredibly peculiar set of images, together painting a picture that seems almost...morbid. Well, disturbing at least. But show me one real poet who's not just a little bit disturbed! I think the last 4 stanzas (counting that end line) really captured the feeling of the *act* of writing poetry. Very glad someone had the nerve to spend some ink on the strangeness of the feeling. Lines of 'my linbs in a locust cage...' '...freeze my nerves./My box of vocal nothings...' etc. I can defnitely see how this is specific to your poetry, dark and quirky as it is, but also liked the bits that are more universal, such as that closing line. It's kind of wistful and...well, true. In other words...Woah. Weird. I liked this!
| Paste on Smile chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Beautiful. Very deep!