WHY DON'T YOU UPDATE? i mean gosh, 3 months, no wonder it would seem that the apocalipse came if you updated! but this is really starting to get good! like it always has but PLEASE UPDATE! I'm reading this before i get ready for my dance! yay PARTAY!

:O KISSY! *points*

Wow, it's been awhile. I'm glad you updated. I want more. I hope you get a lot of time to write this summer.

S.S. Dailey

What is that, a year? Lol, I remember reading this story last summer. Anyway, I'm glad that you are not giving up this story. I still have to recall the characters and plot, but it would not be hard, since this is quite a unique story. Hopefully I will see more updates from you this summer!

The world IS ending. I didn't think you were EVER going to update. *sniff* But you did! Yay! Now I have to remember the characters but I pretty much remember everything now. That one guy Devi is with still freaks me out.

~Meg

WOO! I cant want wait fer the next one! .

Hiya, thanks for the shoutout. You know, Tavin had always seemed to care about Devi's well-being, though not naturally in a gentle manner. In this chapter, what Tavin said was true, she did sort of forgot about her friends but whether or not it was because she thought they were in danger any more, she did not go back for them the minute she knew she's safe. So I don't think she had a reason to be cold towards Tavin. Btw, the ancient language that they were speaking, did you make it up or is there really such a language?

Oh, and Ewan. He must be a very very good friend of Devi's to actually take the frustration out on Aurelle, who he had crushed on for so long. Anyway, Ewan and Aurelle were getting close to Devi! Yay, I'm not sure what you are going to do after they get together (or not) but I'm going with them embarking on an adventure.

One more thing, it's better to update later with a good chapter than earlier with a bad one. I'm not specifying anything, but as you'd said yourself, the value of this story is going down. Not alot, I can assure you, but this story can do without it. Good luck for your next chapter!

Great job. You should use more a tiny bit more detail on the charectors. What are their looks? You know that type of stuff. But honestly great job!

Wow, where did that whole anger thing come from? And Devi is kinda pissing me off... she needs her commen sense back. Evil guy ... good guy... she needs some therapy.. or i'm just reading this wrong...

~Meg

I forgot to review the last chapter . Anywho, I liked it :D I wonder what happened to Ewan? It seems like he's got someone elses anger... Tavin's? (hehe, I still LOVE that name)

anyway, update soon! :D

Wow, this story is amazing! I am really really surprised it received so little reviews. I came across this story at the Elimination site and I am really glad I'd read it. The magic is so common yet so different and unique. I love magic that does not require a wand. It makes the individual more powerful in a sense.

Your writing is really fluent and descriptive and I really enjoyed reading the fight that Devi had against the other 3 opponents. It made her seem so...powerful.

Your characters are well-developed and the school sounded really interesting. Do they use textbooks and lockers? Ok, that question was quite irrelevant to the plot of this story, but I just want to know if the school looks like just any normal high school.

I really like your plot and how you'd written it. It has alot of suspense and magic (I LOVE magic!). In the last chapter, I thought Devi had really shot lightning bolts towards the school. I was so relieved that it was only a dream, so the story still has a long way to go. By the ending of this chapter, I have a feeling that something big is going to happen and I really really want to read it. Update soon?

soudns good so far.. im gonna read mro wen im not asleep.

Well, it was a short chapter, but at least you updated. I think I should take my own advice and stop procrastinating...hmm, I just need to stop the Writer's Block. Anyway, good chapter and I hope you update again in the near future. I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens next.

still don't like tavin. he ish annoying. still don't like nita and maerrish... yea... update soon...

Aww... We never got to see a scene with Devi. We better in the next chapter...

And you are evil. But just for you I'm not giving up. I'm taking a nice long break. A very long break.