Reviews for Off to BedGoodnight Verse Comparison
Lynnie-Pooh chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
Hehe, Nice. Cute and short. I like it.

Getuie chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
I found this rather interesting... there's such a flow between the two and it's many times how we operate... from one extreme to the other... sometimes even within days apart not just months... but well written.
Rigalphantisi911 chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
Hm... Interesting. The first one radiates the feeling of pain and turmoil in life. The second is definitly happier. I like the brightness in it. the last part with the "think happy thoughts... all will be well" is my favorite part. Very nice writing! :) See you soon!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
sweet, I like how you did the comparisson of the two poems written at two different times and how they changed, its really beautiful and gives the reader the sense of ending and safety. Very well done, you really have a talent with feelings.