| Reviews for The Horse Whisperers of Avalon: Holding the Day |
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   cajun-cuteness chapter 22 . 3/1/2009 OMFG! 10! 10! 10! I hate that she died, but at least Ryan gets to see her again! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! But I love Eagle the most! BEST HORSE EVER! |
| cajun-cuteness chapter 19 . 3/1/2009 YAY! GO RYAN AND TRILINY! |
| cajun-cuteness chapter 18 . 3/1/2009 BWAHAHA! I love Eagle! |
| cajun-cuteness chapter 17 . 3/1/2009 YAY! RYAN IS GONNA BE WITH HERR! |
| cajun-cuteness chapter 16 . 3/1/2009 BWAHAHAHAHA! I AM AKILA! LOL. Serves them RIGHT! |
| cajun-cuteness chapter 13 . 3/1/2009 NO! RYAN! *sobs* WHY CAN'T HE GO WITH THEM? *stupid question* |
| cajun-cuteness chapter 12 . 3/1/2009 OH MY! I love it! :D *giggles insanely* |
| DestinyAiden chapter 22 . 3/29/2007 I loved it. I would give it an 8. Mainly because I would like to see more involving horses on Earth. Good luck getting it published. |
| precariousbeing13 chapter 22 . 8/23/2005 Happy ending! Yay! I love happy endings! Great story! ~christiangrl247 |
| Someone chapter 22 . 8/12/2005 Wth? I mean, I'm all for tragic endings. But the end was really rushed, not to mension the last chapter was extremely boring. There was no subtle mention of Ryan and Kat's kin either. The least you could do is add at the end something like ?/?/? (the date) Ryan (last name) died, or came into the hospital for mental recovery or somethng like that. I really, really hope that you make an interesting sequel to make up for the horrid last two chapters. |
| Lassuel Tyme chapter 22 . 7/3/2005 Rating: 9 Likes: the details Dislike: length of conversations to a bit Improvement: not a whole more to be done Really good, when's the next one? |
| teagen chapter 22 . 6/19/2005 Finally...and not quite what I was expecting... You made it all h-core(lol) and profound...loser (and I am allowed to say that because I am your best friend). Rating: 8.7You could improve it by doing nothing I guess, I really like how it ending in a weird sorta there goes the end of the world kinda can take out the random romance between witchlady's son and Kat or either make it extended. It kinda threw me off and it made me think it was going to be longer. |
| caz15th chapter 22 . 6/19/2005 Great story, great plot, loved it. But I think it's ending was rushed, and what was up with the last bit? Sorry to be harsh...but are you saying she came back from the dead? Or it was all in his mind? You need to be a bit more specific. Other than that, and the rushed ending, I loved the story and am disappointed to learn their won't be a sequel |
| Rose Richonne chapter 22 . 6/18/2005 I don't know if you deserve a long, amazing review for making me wait so long, glare. But instead I think I will just call you and tell you what I think. tty soon ~ Em |
| Lithamis chapter 22 . 6/18/2005 Ha, here King, are my reviews.1. 8 (hey, you started out great, but the last chapter was CHEESEY!)2. Dislike: The horses... (ned)3. I dunno4. Take out the cheesey ending, make the story go on a bit more.5. Yeah! Only one more week of school left! |